Craft Chat: Upcoming Disruptive Feature

Hello! I’m Taylor Saracen. I’ve been a writer in the adult entertainment industry for seven years. When people find out what I do for a living, they think it’s fascinating, hilarious, or, for a small faction of folks, disturbing. Minus the judgmental subset, I understand their reaction. In fact, I used to joke that I write the parts of the scenes that people fast forward through. But after seeing my first viewer heat map, I learned that people often fast forward through oral, not the storytelling. 

Story based content has always had a place in the industry, but it’s become increasingly popular thanks to the rise of Only Fans. You see, studios can produce Hollywood-esque movies (despite our much lower budget) and while it would be possible for independent content creators to do the same, they don’t. We know that in order to keep people subscribing; we need to deliver high quality scripted content. 

My job isn’t dissimilar to mainstream screenwriting. In our arena, we show the natural progression of what their sex scenes start but don’t finish. After all, we’re great at finishing. Still, our goals remain the same; tell engaging stories that mean something, make our viewers happy, and let our talent shine. Sometimes it’s a tall order considering the compliance standards we need to adhere to, standards that are more limiting than what’s allowed on the “other side,” but damn, do we love trying. 

And try I do, a lot. I’m churning out content and telling varied stories, some that speak to me, and others that, based on our internal data, will speak to subsets of our viewership. We make sure we reach every corner of our audience. We have the freedom to experiment on Disruptive, and that’s wonderful. That being said, what I love most of all is writing features. 

Most of our movies are single scenes, but with features I get to write four scenes with heavy plotting and sweeping character arcs. I draw inspiration from mainstream works that can never turn up the heat to where we can. I love figuring out ways to reimagine their work so they fit into our world, allowing us to see characters with similar motivations in a more raw and unsanitized manner. 

Last year, the Disruptive Films feature For You, I Will was inspired by Netflix’s You. This year our feature is reminiscent of Saltburn

It was a fun challenge to write an Oliver Quick-esque character. Saltburn was erotic, which is great, but I knew we could make something that was just as erotic, and also explicit. We don’t have Jacob Elordi or Barry Keoghan, but as lovely as they are, we don’t need them. I’m so excited for you to see the gorgeous guys taking these roles and making them their own. We’ll have behind-the-scenes photos and videos for you in late April. Keep a lookout for that.

So here’s to the art of storytelling, in all its forms and facets. I’d love to connect with you all as we continue to explore new horizons and push the boundaries of creativity.

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corporalfun
corporalfun
7 months ago

so if we had a storyline to pitch, where and how?

Taylor
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Taylor
7 months ago
Reply to  corporalfun

You can post it here 🙂

Chris
Chris
7 months ago
Reply to  Taylor

Sequel idea to “My Stepbrother’s Bitch”:

I’d like to see maybe a time skip where Jared (Carter Woods) has been living with Carson (Dante Colle) for some time, maybe a couple months even though it’s been like two years since the first scene was filmed. Carson learns pretty quickly that Jared has been habitually stealing money from him like he did at the end of the first scene (who doesn’t notice a hundred dollar bill missing from their wallet?) but decides to play ignorant while keeping track of the money Jared has taken, even going as far as to leave it in obvious places for Jared to find. Doing so causes Jared to become cocky. Carson summons Jared to pay his “rent” to which an unassuming Jared dutifully assumes his role as Carson’s bitch, not knowing that Carson has planned a special form of punishment for his thieving ways and to remind him of his place in the house. While Jared is blowing him, Carson reveals that he knows Jared has been stealing from him much to Jared’s surprise. Carson goes back and forth between forcing Jared down on his dick and yanking him off by his hair, demanding answers from him as Jared gasps for air, denying the accusations over and over again until eventually, overwhelmed and desperate to catch his breath, Jared admits to stealing money, but only confesses to a small portion of it. Carson finally reveals that he knows the actual amount he stole, and recounts specific locations where he planted money for Jared to find as realization that he’s been played for a fool washes over Jared’s face. Carson then fucks Jared while shaming him as a good for nothing thief. It ends with Carson telling Jared that he plans to whore him out to other guys until he earns back every penny he stole from him, opening the series up to more sequels.

Of course, I understand if you have to edit certain story beats for compliance, but I got so invested in these characters before the sex even started which is a testament to the writing and Carter and Dante’s performances. It would be such a shame to not see this story develop more. The above chapter is merely a suggestion, but I think it would logically add to what was established in the first video. Carson, who at first glance seems pretty straight laced and charitable, actually has a darker side to him fueled by repressed resentment. And then there’s hopeless Jared, having just sold his last shred of dignity to Carson in exchange for a roof over his head, can’t help but immediately fall back into the same old habits that got him cast out by their parents to begin with. Is there any low that he won’t stoop to? And what will it take to set him straight, if that’s at all possible?

tomD
tom
7 months ago

I do not think that those long conversations and non sensical scenarios/conversations or story-telling add anything to the scenes because the scenes already do not have any variety or distinctive elements, they just proceed to sex that take place on the bed or sofa fully naked.. What I would like to see is variety, for instances, there are several sport/gym themed scenes on the website but they are also awful and boring even the scenes take place in different settings, I would like to see some great, real sport themed scenes, which include having and keeping plain black-white soccer socks and jockstraps on, that especially feature exclusive models justin matthews, scott finn, carter woods as in bottom role. I hope that Asgmax team would consider making those scenes..

Tim Older'n'Wiser
Tim Older'n'Wiser
8 months ago

I do not know what scenes and features you have written. Generally, the story-telling you take considerable pleasure in is relegated to the first 4 minutes of the video (most recent “Dorm Life” installment is a good example,) is so contrived as to be non-sensical, or just flat out awful (Brie Larson’s magnum opus about a dinner party – I can’t recall the name – is a good example.) Good to learn that I am not alone in fast-forwarding through the oral. (I honestly thought I was the only person who did this.) The oral in the most recent “Dorm Life” installment is easily 10 minutes too long. Mr. Preston’s annalingus of Mr. Woods was certainly erotic, but odd, considering the plot. Quoting a dear, impatient friend, “Ain’t no way twinkie gettin’ in dat azz.” Quite.

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago

Hi Tim, thanks for sharing your thoughts. The storytelling that I take great pleasure in is neither of those examples! I don’t write for Next Door and The Last Course was written and directed by Bree Mills.

There are some brands and series that focus more on scenarios than plotting. For example, many of the Next Door series like “Dorm Life” are hot, fun, scenario based scenes. Next Door Films is where you’ll find sexy plotted story based works.

I’m sorry you didn’t like The Last Course. Bree took great pride in it and it was a big winner at several awards shows. That’s not to say it’s to your taste. I hope you’ll connect more with the upcoming Disruptive Films feature. I’d also suggest watching For You, I Will if you like darker stories with a strong arc.

hairyfun
hairyfun
8 months ago

I would love to see a story using wrestling as the basis for the action. Wrestling trunks and boots are very sexy. They could become erotic wrestling matches with a lot of hot holds and pins. 2 on 1 tag team action would be sizzling. Kam Stone, Ryder Owens, Caden Jackson, Masyn Thorne, Josh Brady, JC Hunt, Ryan Russo, Paul Wagner, Dean Phoenix, Micah Martinez, and Dillon Diaz would be great in the wrestling story. What do you think about this ?

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago
Reply to  hairyfun

Hi! Yes, there’s a few wrestling scenes on Next Door but it would be great to explore more opportunities to include hot guys in singlets!

hairyfun
hairyfun
8 months ago
Reply to  Taylor

Please not singlets, wrestling trunks. They are similar to speedos, or you could use speedos in the scenes.

hairyfun
hairyfun
8 months ago
Reply to  Taylor

Please do not use singlets, use wrestling trunks. They are similar to speedos, or you could use speedos in the scenes.

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago
Reply to  hairyfun

Ah, yes. Sorry, I re-read your comment. Got it!

Bo Knowles
Bo Knowles
8 months ago

So I am in the adult entertainment industry.. my profession is Fantasy Fulfillment Expert. what that means is people contact me men, women, and couples (both gay and straight) and they want me to help them make their fantasies a reality. Whether it be a gangbang or a double penetration scenario, people really start to open up about what turns then on and what about a certain kink or fetish makes them hot. Sometimes the answer surprises me and sometimes I get really turned on myself. I have been. In the industry for 20:+ years and I have made it my passion to explore these erotic desires. What I find with the cum shots is that most women could do without them and with most men it seems to be the proof that he has conquered or has fulfilled his part in the role when everyone has came and it is finished there is almost always a smile and every man can throw his head back chest up and grunt “I’ve been here and I’ve left my mark” and with that comes the satisfaction in a job well done. Whether it be the case or not sometimes the scenes of the cumshots have gotten to be sometimes too raunchy and too over emphasized with the push ours and the continual stream that I swear looks like piss, I get clients coming to me everyday turned on and wanting to know how they too can “cum like a river” or wondering if it is ok to push cum back out every time they have sex and does everyone think that’s hot? To me it gets to be a little much but it definitely helps my business thrive so I thank you for your hard work and great scene writing!

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago
Reply to  Bo Knowles

This is such an interesting perspective, Bo. Thanks so much for sharing. It sounds like you do very important work. What a wonderful career to be able to enjoy yourself while helping people.

HonMikeJohnsonLA
HonMikeJohnsonLA
8 months ago

The oral isn’t just the only thing skipped, the cum shot too; after I know the cumming is coming… [next]. What the point if everybody in porn seems to think we need to see it. Pulling out is the last thing you want to do when you’re, y’know, having an epileptic seizure inducing orgasm, staying in it’s part of it, it’s the whole appeal of bareback which kinda seems the norm now. For the cameras, traces of it is enough, pushing it out is kinda gross too. But nothing of that happens, or happens and then it’s ruined by the other thing, it’s safer to just skip that part or walked away and let it playing — which might be misinterpreted if you’re analytics-driven only — it’s quite literally anticlimactic.

But yeah the setup established a little backstory of how this allegedly straight man tragically was stabbed, over and over. It’s kind of big deal in gay porn. No need for analytics to know that, unless maybe it’s just a job. I don’t mean anything negative by it, but man! it would begin explaining why did the cumshot became such a big deal, humiliating straight men and gang bangs too. And all three have the same issue in common, can you guess with your analytics? I’m gonna give you a clue, it starts with “dis…”. Not swear word, not slang, not in the UrbanDictionary (probably not, it’s a normal random word).

At first I thought the cumshot was overcompensation that carried over from condom scenes, also ruined by it. In fact, I always thought some of the hottest were when actor came prematurely. Inside. In the condom. Then I thought the more aggressive, more graphic stuff came about as a result of studios trying to out do what another a misguided analytics, since y’know most will just watch the first thing that pops kinda normalizing it at the same time. I thought I was crazy to come up with such a scheme but the confirmation of you guys knowing where they playhead position is…still make me think it was crazy to think that but it’s not such a far fetch notion anymore.

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago

Thanks for commenting! We do use analytics when discussing what we’re going to produce, but in different ways. It guides us in certain instances, but not in others. For example, we still include oral in every scene despite it not being the most popular part of the scene. We’ll have a blog post about the data we crunch in upcoming weeks.

Regarding cumshots, there’s been a major push toward creampies. From what I can tell (keep in mind, I’m not the data girl), people are drawn to finishing inside rather than shooting on the ass cheeks or facials. I don’t always specify how the models should finish (sometimes it’s out of our hands because they’re just enjoying themselves), but if it’s complimentary to the story, I will. For instance, if it’s a romantic scene, I’ll often suggest a creampie and if it’s a very dom heavy scene, I’ll suggest a facial. It kind of depends. The overarching consensus seems to be that people want to see cum, whether it’s inside or out.

Celestial_Egg
Celestial_Egg
8 months ago

I just joined the site a few days ago and I am glad I checked out the blog link. I was diagnosed with Erectile Dysfunction when I was 19, which has always forced me to assume the role of the bottom with my hook ups. I do not find anal enjoyable at all, and have since considered myself a “side.” I find it interesting the heat map showed most people fast forward through oral play, because I usually turn it off once the anal starts. I have been to every corner of the internet I could find and there seems to be absolutely no professional grade studios or companies that cater to the minority of gays that despise anal sex. Do you think the company could benefit from creating videos that helps people with performance issues (like me) not feel like anal sex is the only thing gay people care about? I have also found it difficult to find videos that have one top and one bottom. Due to my performance issues, I find flip fucking to be the most immediate turn off. If the actors in the video I am already 30 minutes into randomly change positions, I lose all interest and change the video.
I understand I sound like I’m just bitching, but the point all of this makes is that people who only like oral or frotting encounters are discouraged from joining the industry because it seems anal sex is a requirement or you’re not worth being filmed.

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago
Reply to  Celestial_Egg

Hi! Thank you so much for commenting. I actually know several people who aren’t fans of penetration (both on screen and in their personal lives). You’re definitely not alone.

I know it’s probably not in your sexual wheelhouse, but you should check out the line “Throated” on one of the free sites that allow you to look at porn without a membership. It’s straight, but I’ve been wanting to do something similar in gay for YEARS. Take a look at it and let me know what you think and if you agreed that it would translate well to the gay side. It’s a little rough, but it’s oral only. It’s been a tough sell but if it works well in straight as a niche, I think it can do the same in gay.

I don’t take your response as bitching. This is what we’re looking for on the blog. We want to have the ability to interact and understand what viewers are interested in and what doesn’t float their boat.

I know I’ve written several scenes that aren’t flips. It will take me a bit, but I’m going to go back through Disruptive and recommend movies that meet your specs. I also know that there are certain scenes that I’ve specified should have longer than average oral encounters due to the story and what I wanted to get across. I’ll identify those as well. Our upcoming feature has some erotic non-penetrative moments and no flippies!

Again, thanks for the comment!

Polar3e
Polar3e
8 months ago

I have been with ASGmax since the beginning and the stories written and told and of course then acted out are interesting and caring and at times sadistic loving but I enjoy them all and stay here to see new stories and looking forward to many more.The Saltburn story should be very good.Thank you Taylor for letting us or me to comment and hopefully give you the writer alot of hope and continue to be a great site and great stories.

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Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago
Reply to  Polar3e

Thanks so much! I love to interact and see what people like/don’t like! It only makes us better. Thanks for being a part of the community 🙂

Marc
Marc
8 months ago

Thanks for the insight, Taylor. Looking forward to seeing the Saltburn inspired feature.

Taylor
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Taylor
8 months ago
Reply to  Marc

Thanks, Marc. I’m really excited! I can’t wait to see it come to life.